Funny- as I was re-reading this chapter before posting yesterday, I kept shaking my head thinking I was being too simplistic with Jack's post-avalanche retrieval of his senses. I know so much from SAR that it's hard to pull out just the major details that will make it resonate with a reader- without making it an overkill of SAR details. It sounds like I did okay!
If a slope lets go above you, remember you'll hear a thunderous boom first! It's the craziest thing, you'll ever hear! If you get caught in it, swim, swim, swim upward and keep your hands in front of your face!
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Date: 2013-02-18 02:58 pm (UTC)If a slope lets go above you, remember you'll hear a thunderous boom first! It's the craziest thing, you'll ever hear! If you get caught in it, swim, swim, swim upward and keep your hands in front of your face!
LOL on the conversion. You've got that right!
Thanks so much for reading!