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gwylliondream on LJ ([personal profile] gwyllion) wrote2009-07-06 02:42 pm

Rainy Day Drabble

Title: Rainy Day Drabble
Author: gwylliondream
Genre: canon
Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Rating: PG
Words: 100
Disclaimer: I did not create these characters. No disrespect intended. No profit desired, only muses.
Comments: Comments are welcome anytime, thanks so much for reading!



Rainy days were best. Aguirre couldn’t expect them to tend the woolies, nor would he make a surprise visit. Lounging all day tentbound was perfectly acceptable, even to Ennis.

On rainy days, they left the tent only to piss. Even that wasn’t mandatory. Jack filled a discarded Bettermost can with his stream. Ennis refused, instead standing in the torrent, soaking his clothes.

“Better off to piss naked,” called Jack. “Won’t get yer clothes wet.”

Ennis reluctantly agreed.

They were naked all day anyway. No sense donning clothes for pissing. After that, Jack just dried Ennis’s wet skin with his own.
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[personal profile] chamilet 2009-07-06 07:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't think I'll ever be sad about a rainy day again:)

[identity profile] gwylliondream.livejournal.com 2009-07-06 07:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Yup, just think of them hanging out in the tent!

XO
Donna

[identity profile] acquaalta.livejournal.com 2009-07-06 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay for rainy days. I always liked rainy days as long as I don't have to go outside ... guess they like the rain because they don't have to go outside ... :)
This is a lovely little piece. Thank you, donna.
All the best, B.

[identity profile] gwylliondream.livejournal.com 2009-07-06 09:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks B! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I hope it doesn't rain when you visit!
XO
Donna

[identity profile] acquaalta.livejournal.com 2009-07-06 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
True! Then I want to go outside - so I hope for a lovely sunny autumn. Unless someone can show me where Jack and Ennis put up that tent of theirs!!
:)

[identity profile] roby100.livejournal.com 2009-07-06 10:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Why my rainy days are never so sexy? It rained this morning but I was in my office and no sexy guys around!!

You found a good alternative to carving wooden horses :)

A big hug
Roby

[identity profile] gwylliondream.livejournal.com 2009-07-07 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
No sexy guys in your office, Roby? You need a new job!

XO
Donna

[identity profile] bentgyro.livejournal.com 2009-07-07 05:07 am (UTC)(link)
Yes - there is something to be said for a rainy day!
Thanks!
HT

[identity profile] gwylliondream.livejournal.com 2009-07-07 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks HT! I'm glad you like the rain!

XO
Donna

[identity profile] gnashsang.livejournal.com 2009-07-07 05:59 am (UTC)(link)
better off to stay nekkid, indeed! i love this, it was short and sexy and sweet. :D

[identity profile] gwylliondream.livejournal.com 2009-07-07 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I bet you liked Jack's 'pissing in the can' part best, eh?

XO
Donna

[identity profile] gnashsang.livejournal.com 2009-07-08 08:28 am (UTC)(link)
lol, not the best, but it was amusing! :D

Very very sweet

[identity profile] ohiomyown.livejournal.com 2009-07-07 07:38 am (UTC)(link)
I love the logic of staying naked, you don't get your clothes wet when you go out to pee (sorry girls pee - boys piss)

Loved their rainy day!

Re: Very very sweet

[identity profile] gwylliondream.livejournal.com 2009-07-07 03:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Works for me! I camp out way too much!

XO
Donna

BTW

[identity profile] ohiomyown.livejournal.com 2009-07-07 07:40 am (UTC)(link)
I love the design and words of your LJ!
Judy

Re: BTW

[identity profile] gwylliondream.livejournal.com 2009-07-07 03:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much Judy! I tried that new "green" thing. And I always liked the idea of refuting the "There are places we can't return" line of the trailer!

Donna

[identity profile] gilli-ann.livejournal.com 2009-07-07 10:33 am (UTC)(link)
Hey, this was great! Conveying very clear scenes and characteristics in so few words. Restrained, certainly down to earth and true to canon with the pissing in the can and all, and yet so HOT! Loved it, and I'm way pleased about the images it leaves behind. Rain-drenched bare skin, rubbing.... Mmmmm-hmmm. Thank you!

[identity profile] gwylliondream.livejournal.com 2009-07-07 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much gilli-ann! I'm glad you liked it!

XO
Donna